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Adam Kaufman's avatar

Great work. I keep expecting things to end a lot more poorly for the characters, and I’m relieved when they survive

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

I save the high body counts for my novels.

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Charles Gatlin's avatar

This story has so much going for it! I especially liked the narrator’s outlook. The engineering all felt real, too.

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

I worked with a chemical engineer to get the engineering right. The "pig" drew on the last chapter of "Rust: The Longest War" by Waldman (I recommend the first and last chapters of the book).

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Nicholas David Rosen's avatar

I rediscovered hydrogen embrittlement as a graduate student in materials; I was doing chemical vapor deposition of diamond films, using hydrogen mixed with methane. When I had occasion to try to take my setup apart, the steel parts were extremely hard (and not brittle enough to just shatter). I could have gotten a paper out of that — new method of producing hardened steel — except that asking around led to my being told that the effect was known.

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

It's always a relief when a scientist looks at my story and does *not* find a technical error. It's going to be interesting finding ways to avoid that problem in hydrogen-rich environments.

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Nicholas David Rosen's avatar

My claim to being a scientist is a little shaky; I trained to be one, and was a post-doc for a year, but I’ve been examining patent applications since 1998, not doing research and keeping up with developments in the field.

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

Fair. But that's a better check than some stories get.

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Alistair Young's avatar

I always love some high-quality space engineering!

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

I try!

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

As always, I love the engineering details, very convincing!

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

Thank you!

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RDM's avatar
Jun 12Edited

paperback? A bridge too far?

want to read old school style...this looks like good stuff.

Edit: Ah, almost missed the Amazon link. Gonna ask my local library to carry. New to KG, which should I start with?

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

Torchship is my first and most popular book. If you like fantasy, try The Lost War. The first 17 Substack stories are collected in Unmitigated Acts. Once I have enough of them to keep the covers apart, I'll do another collection with the next batch of Substack shorts.

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Jared Michaud's avatar

Nice, Karl. Very entertaining!

Good work.

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Karl Gallagher's avatar

Thank you!

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